Subject: Guys, come in and check my business letter...
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Guys, come in and check my business letter...

Dear Mr./Ms.www.fobshanghai.com7d&C(^-W,q8I/m
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We learn that you are in the market for power tools. We would like to inform you that we specialize
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We, ...... Power Tools,. Ltd. from China, a sino-American joint enterprise established in
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/P9J9S%B3s m#Zbusiness forum,trade forum,business opportunity,Business China,Business India,Brazil businesssame time we can do OEM brand for you.www.fobshanghai.com(x;|8l8w(F

|6s8Y5p'u/f,r/~FOB Business ForumWe enclose a catalogue and a simple price list for your reference, please find. Any questions, please[A Professional Business Forum]%j,e-T-u"_;l'u6e*o%k
feel free to contact me.
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5P/B:E4y:{'V9g:|%R[A Professional Business Forum]Kindly awaiting your early reply.
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Best regards
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Sales representative
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3V#]+h;G#A6?+\8j6T[A Professional Business Forum]Add: .....FOB Business Forum4|9b6r2T3q
Tel:   0086-....www.fobshanghai.com6I!Y&p;G:I8o7O
Fax:   0086-....www.fobshanghai.com!?/d!`*y)H0W
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Why do i receive few inquiries!!
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/n'y:{5\'N'J8H)uFOB Business Forumpls give a hand and find the wrong in my letter, Thx in advance





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jask1985 (Jask)
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Post at 2008-8-14 21:12  Profile  Space  P.M.  Buddy  Add jask1985 to MSN friend  Talk with jask1985 through MSN QQ Yahoo!
is that your first letter to this client?
$^*E.l0e%z(i"@:[7[8W(C;vbusiness forum,trade forum,business opportunity,Business China,Business India,Brazil businessIf so, this mail maybe get into the junk mail. coz you attached the file,
*k6d(l"T.O/S4Fwww.fobshanghai.comI do not think the first letter with attachment is a good.
,U2j$L'`3O0Rwww.fobshanghai.com[A Professional Business Forum]3l2x8P*s/x5}0p${(Q#q6N$C
What's your title? any payment information? delivery date?





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Post at 2008-8-14 23:25  Profile  Space  P.M.  Buddy 
Not bad. But you can write several forms and than, time will tell u which one is better. Anyway, it is only one point of trade business. Don't give up! There're many and many business people around u. Just as Floor 2, next time, you can send half without attachments and the other with it.

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Post at 2008-8-14 23:26  Profile  Space  P.M.  Buddy 
One more, don't always send the same content to the same email addr. Maybe one or two weeks for a try is ok.

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the first email is just introduction , do not attach anything or it will be spam!FOB Business Forum#b6V%`'G*v,N1^#W3k

&F9o/n,d6U1z8F B7v1Pwww.fobshanghai.comthe other items should be noted: the subject(pls do not use "cooperation" and same meaning words, just wrte down your product name!)www.fobshanghai.com2b1_5^(r U7r4^$U%D
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do not give up and try your best to find a suitable way to promote your product www.fobshanghai.com:B2O&V6i'g'I/x/G1L
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And also we need to send another e-mail to follow up.
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Post at 2008-8-16 08:24  Profile  Space  Site P.M.  Buddy  Add felixhuw to MSN friend  Talk with felixhuw through MSN Yahoo!
This is not the first letter.
#f(e&`:H-f.M+f$y.Q9bwww.fobshanghai.comyes, guys ,i will try your suggestions.FOB Business Forum&S/G"k4J"A&|
thank you very much.





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Post at 2008-8-16 08:28  Profile  Space  Site P.M.  Buddy  Add felixhuw to MSN friend  Talk with felixhuw through MSN Yahoo!
the title is "Professional power tools and accessories"[A Professional Business Forum]5h Y#~"a-x5r+d
this letter is sent to one of my clients. i enclosed a catalogue and price listbusiness forum,trade forum,business opportunity,Business China,Business India,Brazil business*H1B&X&v-l8A%Q$w,S
because we have talked already and these days he just disappearred.FOB Business Forum4|*Y9h7p%]'F2R+v5i(`
He didn't reply me when he was online
8[9X;s4q!_FOB Business Forumi don't know why......[A Professional Business Forum]9Z#Q n-X2S*D,U
so i tried to send a mail with price list to see what i can do next





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Reply #1 felixhuw's post

dear msFOB Business Forum(@4R/_#w1]4@
i have leaned that you  `````from  WHERE 从哪得知这消息最好说一下   
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$u*\"F'p5[4s"Uwe would like to recommand XXproducts to you最好推荐针对性的产品给他
/e6J4M#v$["],I(e;Band shall be glad to enter into business relations with you
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;r8c%Y2]2n0E9e/q(xFOB Business Forumit is just my opinion

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THANK U
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Reply #10 felixhuw's post

so can you copy the letter here?





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I read all,and learn more

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